Wherein Our Blogger Once Again Simultaneously Breaks his Vows of Frivolity and Pundit-Blindness
As longtime readers know, I shy away from commenting on commentators. The infinite regress of the punditry echo chamber makes my head hurt, and a world where we actually have to debate whether Ann Coulter has anything responsible or non-toxic to say is not a world that I want to live in.
The practice of “Fisking,” wherein a web journalist dices up a columnist’s arguments into semi-coherent nuggets in order to insert venal one-liners is another thing I steer clear of, and not only because of the cut n’ paste laziness and inherent contempt for the art of writing. It’s a cantankerous and shallow form of punditainment and intellectually bankrupt in its very conception - imagine trying to get serious music criticism from an episode of “Pop-Up Videos.” Now take out the cute sound effects. And the music. And the bikini-wearing, glycerine-doused dancing supermodels. What you’re left with is some half-wit angrily interrupting a Speedo-clad Mickey Kaus. And who wants to see that?
So I won’t Fisk William Safire’s limp column in yesterday’s Times, but I’d be remiss if I didn’t draw your attention to it. Safire, when he’s not serving as Ariel Sharon’s finger puppet these days, writes quite well. In this particular unapologetic call-to-arms he eloquently offers the most complete, concise, and coherent version of the argument for unilateral war with Iraq that I’ve seen.
What’s remarkable is how incredibly weak and incomplete that argument really is. It’s a colander with a Tupperware lid; the illusion of air-tightness is so superficial that true believers have to insist that it be viewed only at a prescribed angle and at a great distance. Anyone else looking at it can’t help but see all the holes. It’s a self-Fisker.
The holes are a symptom of the untreated flesh-eating disease our society has contracted during this long, fruitless lead-up to war. In another era the pro-attack right would be patching up the holes in their arguments, offering some sort of reasons why, for example, we can afford to alienate so many of our most powerful allies, why we need not fear galvanizing and inspiring the anti-Americanism of the Islamist movement, why we are so embarrassingly unable to convince the the world of Iraq’s possession of illegal weapons when we claim that their existence is an undeniable fact, how we can have the gall to expect other nations to ever abide by U.N. decisions when we ourselves make such gleeful proclamations about our right to ignore them.
Safire says, “It is futile to try to reason with passionate marchers waving signs proclaiming that America’s motives are to conquer the world and expend blood for oil.” Is it? It’s hard to say - the Bush administration hasn’t even tried. Trying would involve actually replying to reasoned arguments (from the left and the right) directly, answering objections point-by-point rather than merely repeating what spurred those objections in the first place. No trial prosecutor has ever won by completely and utterly ignoring the evidence, witnesses and arguments of the defense. This is something the administration should’ve taken into account while failing so spectacularly to “make the case” these past eight months.
But the most telling evidence of this short-sighted blindness to reason and the inevitable consequences is best expressed by Safire’s own conclusion, a surprisingly clumsy attempt to add some elevated Shakespearean glamour to the proceedings:
“This campaign near the Ides of March will make us safer, allaying our fears; it has the potential of making the world freer, justifying our hopes.”
Despite the bizarre conceit of equating Saddam with Caesar, I couldn’t have picked a better allusion myself. After all, didn’t Brutus base his decision to move forward on the nebulous fear of what Caesar might do if he became more powerful? And didn’t he and his conspirators plan their arguably justified assassination a bit too rashly, without the buy-in of a few key allies, and with ultimately tragic results? Maybe I need to brush up my Shakespeare, but I don’t recall “Julius Caesar” ending on March 16th with a joyous keg party and Mark Antony giving Brutus a big hug.
Safire was doubtless cribbing off of one of George Bush’s term papers from Yale. He should’ve looked at the grade at the top of the page.





19 comments
BJ
March 7, 2003 at 4:30 pm
1Well said, Adam. I particularly like your dismissal of “fisking,” which is as spineless a form of punditry as I’ve come across recently (admittedly sometimes entertaining in the short term, but ultimately the Chinese food of commentary, unsatisfying and bad for your health).
John Isbell
March 7, 2003 at 4:46 pm
2Great last line.
Elayne Riggs
March 7, 2003 at 5:12 pm
3The practice of “Fisking,” wherein a web journalist dices up a columnist’s arguments into semi-coherent nuggets in order to insert venal one-liners…
I can’t thank you enough for defining this term for me, Adam. I’ve never come across another blogger who’s explained it before, so I’ve been in the dark for months!
Elliott
March 7, 2003 at 5:18 pm
4Another line from Julius Caesar might be more fitting,”Oh forgive me, you bleeding piece of earth, for cooperating with these butchers. You are the noblest man who ever lived in all of history. Over your wounds now I predict the future? And Caesar’s ghost, roaming about in search of revenge, with hate at his side still hot from hell, will in these boundaries with a ruler’s voice cry ‘HAVOC’ and let slip the dogs of war, so that this terrible action will smell above the earth, with rotting corpses, begging to be buried.”
And this action will smell above the earth, with rotting corpses. Presidents should have to read the Bard of Avon…. and Fanatical Apathy, of course.
Rana
March 7, 2003 at 5:38 pm
5“It’s a colander with a Tupperware lid”
This has to be one of the better metaphors for the style of reasoning that seems to come out of the current administration with frustrating regularity. I don’t know which is scarier — the idea that they don’t worry about the holes because _they_ can’t see them, or because they don’t care if _we_ see them.
From all of us who keep running around yelling, “What about the holes?!” — thanks for reassuring us that we’re not imagining them!
eyeh8shrub
March 7, 2003 at 5:41 pm
6The dogs of war don’t negotiate
The dogs of war won’t capitulate,
They will take and you will give,
And you must die so that they may live
One world, it’s a battleground
- pink floyd, the dogs of war
Raya
March 7, 2003 at 5:59 pm
7Adam, I must warn you away from ever reading William Safire. It’s been scientifically proven to lower the IQ by up to 20%. And notwithstanding your charitable assertion to the contrary, he’s a terrible writer. I never know which is more nauseating–his lack of style or his lack of substance–but either way it can’t be good for the health.
Larry Wilmott
March 7, 2003 at 7:12 pm
8Safire’s quote of Teddy Roosevelt: “those cold and timid souls who know neither victory nor defeat” reminded me of words written by someone else:
“Without big risks, history never grants big successes.
Our so-called intellectuals…can see the past, but not much of the present, and nothing at all of the future. … To them difficulties are not there to be mastered, rather to be surrendered to. … One cannot make history with such quivering people.”
That visionary was none other than Joseph Goebbels, in an address to the German people on December 31, 1938. I seem to recall that Goebbels and his boss made a lot of history in the years that followed.
See the full text at http://www.calvin.edu/academic/cas/gpa/goeb16.htm
small child
March 7, 2003 at 9:19 pm
9Sorry about the non-relevance to today’s “topic”, but I didn’t see anywhere else to put this.
We talk about how the Security Council will “prove its revelvance” if it stops all debate and approves our resolution. I thought that the whole point of the United Nations was to allow for debates such as these, and to, I don’t know, promote ideas from countries that will be for the betterment of the world. I mean, the name kind of implies that…
But maybe I’m just dilusional. Maybe the point of the United Nations is so that we can have someone to blame when things don’t go our way. It just seems to me that trying to force members of this establishment into doing what one country wants is what would really be proving it irrelevant.
I don’t have a good answer to all of the stuff we hear about Saddam being evil and people in the country waiting for us to take him out of power, but I can raise an issue with this phrasing of ours. And I will for as long as I stay “dilusional.”
Nick
March 8, 2003 at 12:55 am
10And yet the beer swilling masses who are lined up for war… Will they have read their Shakespeare?
Elliott
March 8, 2003 at 1:57 am
11Hey, I resent that. I swill beer and read Shakespeare, but not both at the same time.
Just a minute… I think I Fisked Bill Shakespeare with an earlier entry, lo siento.
For more musical entries, check out Bob Dylan’s lyrics for “masters of war”
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/bobdylan/mastersofwar.html
or Ozzy, “war pigs”
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/ozzyosbourne/warpigs.html
It seems that poets, musicians and writers can convey real human feeling, but Bush just seems like a animatron from Madame Tussauds when he deals diplomatically with… well, whenever he moves.
Mike Z
March 8, 2003 at 2:14 am
12Bush has successfully turned this into a no-win situation for everybody. Every option leads to unacceptable consequences and every country ends up sounding petty and self-serving. What a crappy leader.
As Adam pointed out in his last non-satirical tirade, we can all see how the only way to get Saddam to comply with UN resolutions is to provide a believable set of consequences, but the execution of this strategy has shown abysmal judgment in terms of potential gains vs. potential negatives.
Bush gave up getting drunk on alcohol and substituted being drunk on power. If an alcoholic friend keeps acting like a jerk and picking fights, it gets really hard to hang out with him after awhile, and eventually you’re no longer friends.
Raya
March 8, 2003 at 7:23 pm
13Bush gave up getting drunk on alcohol and substituted being drunk on power.
Oo, psychoanalytic. I like it. Maybe Bush does have an “addictive personality.” To the extent, that is, that he has a personality at all….
Miel
March 9, 2003 at 12:45 am
14I’m not quite sure of what Fisking is. This is all Safire is saying as far as I can see.
1. Iraq poses a tremendous threat to the U.S. In fact, a greater threat than the U.S. poses to Iraq. More people will die in ‘our cities’ as the result of (?Iraqi bombs??? What exactly??? Airplanes crashing into buildings???)
Amazing. Could he really believe that? It’s so far outside anything even remotely resembling the possible.
2. There is no point in trying to argue with those who morally oppose the war. They are too ‘passionate.’ One cannot engage in reasoned dialogue with the morally passionate. Or is it: One cannot argue with those who disagree with one. [As opposed to? The dispassionate? The cold-blooded? Those who care nothing about morality?]
3. We should pay absolutely no attention to the consequences of war. This contradicts his earlier argument that we should have a pre-emptive strike because the consequences would result in less dead in ‘their cities’ than in ‘our cities.’ We do it because we are sure the outcome leaves us all better off so let’s not worry about being unsure of the outcome.
4. Somehow magically a transformation will take place throughout the region and it will become wholesome and democratic. Again, this would be a consequence of war and assumes Iraq will be made into a shining democracy. Although we are not supposed to worry about the outcome or cost of the war–in lives, dollars or anything else.
I’m pretty sure that sums up the self-contradictory nature of the pro-war argument. We must have a war to prevent terrible consequences but it is also important that we do not think or worry about the consequences of the war.
So in that sense Safire’s argument is brilliant.
Jason
March 9, 2003 at 1:08 pm
15Thanks for introducing me to the definiton/concept of “Fisking.” Who did you name the term for, anyway?
BJ
March 9, 2003 at 11:16 pm
16A definition of “fisking” from Eugene Volokh.
Kevin Drum offers an example of how stupid it is.
ishmael
March 9, 2003 at 11:26 pm
17Miel: good points all. However (regarding your point #1), it seems to me that Safire (et al) aren’t saying that potentially more people would be killed or harmed in the U.S. than would be killed or harmed in Iraq (depending on who does the first attack) — you are thinking overly compassionately. It’s my sense that there is a huge mathematical factor that you have to plug in here, to “justify” the equation. I’m not sure what it is, precisely, but let me throw out 250,000/1 (worth of Iraqi life as a ratio to an American life).
P.S. As an aside on Safire’s article, itself, can you believe the postulation of “Bush” as a “Wilsonian idealist”? Bush may have surprised us by being able to spit out Rove’s clever deceit, without spitting on himself at the same time, but I really would be surprised to learn of the Dub having any “vision”.
A word of advice: never stay at the Bates-Bush Motel!
Michael
March 9, 2003 at 11:38 pm
18Jason,
Adam didn’t create the term “Fisking.” It’s blogger lingo, originating from right wing attacks on lefty Brit journalist Robert Fisk, who won some mainstream notoriety after being attacked by a mob in Afghanistan. Volokh defines it basically as attacking the damn pinko lefty peaceniks, but it’s now become the term of art for attack pieces (from any side) using a cut&paste format. My googling came up with this primer, which takes a decidedly more positive view of the genre than Adam, fwiw.
ishmael
March 10, 2003 at 6:09 pm
19Gorge’s “black-gold(en) rule”: if there’s oil, kill first (and everyone around them), then rule.